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This is my improvement in blog comment            

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                                                                        Siyona9 May 2016 at 17:14
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                                                                                Siyona29 June 2016 at 15:54
Hi this is Siyona

I am in Rimu class from the.

Photos it look's like you people hade so much fun

what activity did you do.



                                                                           
                                                                            

                                                                                        


     




    

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  1. Lee-Anne WahoSeptember 8, 2016 at 12:41 PM

    Hi there Siyona.
    You have much better skills in commenting now. Be sure to use this kind of structure all the time. It is so pleasing to see how much you have improved. Ka pai.

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