You have worked hard on this slide Siyona and have lots of good ways to show caring for Others. I like that you will help old people in the future. For your next slide I would like you to put speech bubbles in your presentation
Bula vinaka Siyona. This is a awesome post I like how you have given your self some feedback that you would help people in the future. Here is some feedback from me to you is make sure you have the correct numbers on the slide but awesome work.
Kia ora Siyona. I am really impressed with the positive messages you have included in your slide. People who view this can easily learn how to care for others. Ka pai.
Namaste Siyona , Ashy here. I like how you presented your work on the slide it was really neat and easy to read. My favorite part was the 4th slide because it was really true you should treat others like you wanted to be treated.
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You have worked hard on this slide Siyona and have lots of good ways to show caring for Others. I like that you will help old people in the future. For your next slide I would like you to put speech bubbles in your presentation
ReplyDeleteBula vinaka Siyona.
ReplyDeleteThis is a awesome post I like how you have given your self some feedback that you would help people in the future. Here is some feedback from me to you is make sure you have the correct numbers on the slide but awesome work.
Kia ora Siyona.
ReplyDeleteI am really impressed with the positive messages you have included in your slide. People who view this can easily learn how to care for others.
Ka pai.
Namaste Siyona , Ashy here. I like how you presented your work on the slide it was really neat and easy to read. My favorite part was the 4th slide because it was really true you should treat others like you wanted to be treated.
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