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                                                                        Siyona9 May 2016 at 17:14

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                                                                                Siyona29 June 2016 at 15:54

Hi this is Siyona

I am in Rimu class from the.

Photos it look's like you people hade so much fun

what activity did you do.

                                                                           

                                                                            

                                                                                        

     

    

Music we have been learning this song at school

Music we have been learning this song at school

Reading

We have been reading this book in reading.

Making tens.

Math

Today in math we learned making tens here is my slide down below of how we worked it out made from Siyona .