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                                                                                Siyona29 June 2016 at 15:54

Hi this is Siyona

I am in Rimu class from the.

Photos it look's like you people hade so much fun

what activity did you do.

                                                                           

                                                                            

                                                                                        

     

    

Music we have been learning this song at school

Music we have been learning this song at school

Reading

We have been reading this book in reading.

Making tens.

Math

Today in math we learned making tens here is my slide down below of how we worked it out made from Siyona .

We are learning about positive comments  on blog. 


              greeting 

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                                     full stop 
                                 
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Skoolbo

We are learning about  Skoolbo it is a fun game and it is a learning game it has adding , subtracting , division  , time table . You have to verse people I versed Syney she is from Henderson valley  school  I did ten times table.

This is good for my learning because  it makes my learning faster.

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